So, my sister-in-law says that I haven't finished this one yet because it's missing an ending. But, well... although I know it needs more development and it needs to be longer, I kind of disagree about the ending. lol. I'll let you form your own opinion.
Here is my first play, called Baggage. As a time-restraint warning, it is about 7 pages long. Enjoy, and please give feedback (either positive or negative)!
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so where'd you come up with that teenage boy rebellious sarcasm? cuz it was really good! very natural and believable. i'm surprised at how good you are at it.
and I like the ending the way it is. just my opinion, but I think it leaves you thinking. and it's the whole male bonding thing- without being mushy and stuff. i like it. (kinda reminded me of the kid in "A Walk to Remember" and his dad)
Hi you! hope you don't mind - but I saw the note on your facebook and thought I would check it out! :) I really enjoyed reading this play - I think you could go either way on the ending. just depends on what venue you want to take! nice job!
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